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Is It Me?

Trapped in this noise,
I cannot escape.
So many echoes,
Each making a scrape.

Slowly I move elsewhere,
In a feeble attempt.
Try to hide;
Don’t face the tempt.

Yet all of this is failure,
It’s all dragging me down.
So I continue to look
For a way out of this town.

I feel as if
I am the only one sane.
But everyone says different…
Am I that hard to tame?

Am I to blame
For this insanity?
Is all else different
Or is it just me?

Author notes

Urggh. Rewritten 4/10/2006.
Written February 17th, 2005

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