By the low glow of the candlelight
The two of us are alone tonight
You have my soul completely zombified
By the sweet seduction in your eyes
My heart races with exponential intensity
You beauty is the true definition of serenity
I brush back your silky soft hair
And kiss your lips with such tender care
I feel the shiver down my spine
Our passion for the night grows as our souls entwine
Gently massaging your inner thigh
This lovely tension soars into the sky
You reach up and tickle my neck and behind my ear
It makes my every thought of worry disappear
Laying forth on my sheet less bed
And you smile, letting me know what's ahead
I look up and you look down
uncontrollably I snake around
Soft at first until you start to pant
I can't stop now, I just can't
Author notes
Written April 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- Eroticism by ThinkPurple.
300 points, ended April 16, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
Very passionate and sensual. Good write.
-
I think if a man ever wrote something like this for me, I would be half way to in love before the last line.
The line "Our passion for the night grows as our souls entwine" felt a little awkward to me...Maybe try shortening it and leaving the words "for the night" out? Just an idea. Great job, I really enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
-
Sweetly Sensual!!!
A very passionate and sensual poem filled with love that comes from the soul. Something rare among the youth of today but very welcome. Women like to be teased and foreplay is the real secret behind the perfect love making.
Good luck in the contest.
Much Love
RK -
This is good, the rhyming flow is great, good luck in the contest!
Keep writing!
-SW
Adding your comment:
