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Escape You

I know I'm alone now
I know what it feels like
I need to escape you
But it's not that easy
So break me into small parts
I'll let go in small doses
Getting over you
Is harder than it seemed before
I need to escape you
Is this what the job entailed?
That wasn't in the description
I can't find the exit sign
But you already did
How did this happen?
I'm in over my head
I need to escape you
But it won't be easy
I need to forget you
I can't even remember

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Written April 11th, 2006

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  • virtual orchestra
    April 12, 2006
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    Thanks! May I ask which parts you found hard to follow? It might help me out.


  • wynd-fyre
    April 11, 2006
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    this is a good poem. It WOULD make a good song, and of course that is what it's supposed, to be, but, anyway. I write lyrics too....although, most arent all that good. this one is great. I have to confess, i sometimes have a hard time following some things, but what i understood of yours was awsome.

    Kujo