when the sky goes dark,
and you feel alone,
and nobody knows where you are.
i find you crying at the shore of the river,
wondering.....what is wrong.
for we both know,
no matter what happens,
we will always be together,
in an everlasting love.....
..... 'til death do us apart.....
Author notes
Written April 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- My first Love by wingsofgold25.
300 points, ended September 1, 2006, 15 entries
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i love it
thats sweet
i feel all alone 2
good jod
nice write -
Nice Job
Very good right to the point short and sweet I like the way you expressed your feelings.
Good Luck in the Contest.Arlie -
awesome!
OMG!!! this is my favorite of all your awesome poems!! seriously, its short but delivers the punch nice and clean! the last line is my favorite, hopefully ill see you soon
NEHA :} -
I think you radiate a message within the lines of this poem that is so tender and sweet
You have done a great job expressing your feelings here!
thank you for sharing and welcome to the site! -
ok
this is not me?...i know
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