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This stranger and me

Unravelling its skin
revealing each new face
as if seen for the very first time.

I stare hard

making out some sort of recognition
of the familiar creature,
almost naked, in front of me.

It dwells upon me,
hints of perplexed thoughts. Unknowing
of any reaction of how to compliment it.
It looks back at me
with the unforgivable hurt of a child

But then how am i supposed
   to receive you?
you are not longer welcome.
Stranger in some thing that is mine.

Leave
   and close the door.

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Written April 11th, 2006

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  • Crash
    April 11, 2006
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    THat was a very interesting piece of witing.

    It dwells upon me,
    hints of perplexed thoughts. Unknowing
    of any reaction of how to compliment it.
    It looks back at me
    with the unforgivable hurt of a child

    That was my favorite part. Much enjoyed.....

    Crash