Take me right this moment
tell me what you need
On the hot excitement
I can't help but feed
Your sweat, a burning cold
your eyes a freezing hot
I crave for you inside
and long to give you all I've got
To listen to your breathing
inhale your every taste
The look I saw tonight
will never be erased
The hardness between my legs
the juices that you stir
Hear my unexplained whisper
how I strive to overcome her
Am I just a memory
or was the moment me and you
The thoughts I have racing
are many things I want to do
Take what I can offer
don't hold back a thing
In my ears so loud
I hear a constant ring
You made me feel alive
enjoying every stroke
Thought I may be dreaming
but I never woke
You fell asleep soon after
and it's forever my favorite scene
If you had half the emotion
you'd know exactly what I mean
The beauty all around you
forever I could just look
My heart I voluntarily gave you
my emotions you selfishly took
I can say it's all over
but let's be somewhat real
I know I loved you then
and I think I love you still
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Written July 22nd, 2005
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Awesome, very true
omg...wow.I've been reding your works and so far I really like them. You're a great writer...I don't know what to say here other than wow.

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