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Here and Now

Take me right this moment

tell me what you need

On the hot excitement

I can't help but feed

Your sweat, a burning cold

your eyes a freezing hot

I crave for you inside

and long to give you all I've got

To listen to your breathing

inhale your every taste

The look I saw tonight

will never be erased

The hardness between my legs

the juices that you stir

Hear my unexplained whisper

how I strive to overcome her

Am I just a memory

or was the moment me and you

The thoughts I have racing

are many things I want to do

Take what I can offer

don't hold back a thing

In my ears so loud

I hear a constant ring

You made me feel alive

enjoying every stroke

Thought I may be dreaming

but I never woke

You fell asleep soon after

and it's forever my favorite scene

If you had half the emotion

you'd know exactly what I mean

The beauty all around you

forever I could just look

My heart I voluntarily gave you

my emotions you selfishly took

I can say it's all over

but let's be somewhat real

I know I loved you then

and I think I love you still

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Written July 22nd, 2005

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  • VampireShadow
    April 14, 2006
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    Awesome, very true

    omg...wow.I've been reding your works and so far I really like them. You're a great writer...I don't know what to say here other than wow.