The ache inside me
Grows so strong
And I have felt it
For way too long
I need some one to love me
Some one to hold
A person I can be with
Who wont make me feel cold
Just one body out there
Who makes me feel whole
That I was meant for
Who completes my soul
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Written April 11th, 2006
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Nice
I agree with that, been searching for quite some time now. But ... this poem was simple and sweet, and not a bad thing to try and find. Keep up the good work -
awww poor kimy there is always some one out there for every one
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I've wished for almost ever that I could be this person
Great write honey. Love yew. xxxxxxxxxx
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I love this, and oh how I can relate...
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I think that just about any one can relate to this poem. Well... those of us who haven't found that one special person. Beleive me when I say that one day you will feel the love and support the you seek. Great write.. loads of feeling.
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I ask my self one question. Why haven't i read more of your poems lately? It's so nice to read them again. This is a great write from you. It's so simple but has a lot of power to it. Strong message behind it and a lovely rhyme to go with it also. Well done. :-)
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I like the rymme through this piece and sometimes its hard to keep up but you;ve doe it well. Well done sweetie this shows how well you can write.
xxx Char xxx
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Great POem...
Great poem! Keep it up. God Bless you in all you do. You have wonderful talent, so don't let anyone tell you else wise...
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