How long you must own me
What little I was
So come from the darkness
And swallow the dust
Hatred inside
Glass shatters out
The moment of truth
That left you in doubt
Deal with the demons
And let in the light
Falling through Fate
No longer alive
Lying in a dark hall
With corridors so quick
Follow the footfalls
With a river rushing blood thick
Smile in shame
A tiny shake of the head
Buried down deep
Remain with the dead
Author notes
Don't look at me like that.
Written April 11th, 2006
S h a d o w S t a l k e r = Pre-written Poem
A contest entry
- Slipping Into the Pit of Your Dispair... and Knowing No one really Cares... by Jazzlyn.
800 points, ended May 13, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very good i liked the way you rymed with this
it worked very well
P.S:: Please fix the name in the AN put spaces between each letter -
Awesome steph really awesome I had forgotten that little dark scary place your poems send me to (shudders) this poem was really great and I loved the imagery in it I could picture the hallway I could picture it! and you know how hard it is for me to picture stuff sometimes lol well its good to come back after my long leave of absense to find ya'll still rocking at the poetry thang. loved it keep it up
Eeyore -
awesome poem
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Great poem girl!!
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WOAH! this is awesome! I agree with Dances With Trees I love the last stanza!
Amazing stuff right here!
missy
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Sick, Twisted, and Great!
HoLy $hIt!!!! Steph! This was friggin' Awesome!!!!! You are SO sick and twisted!.....It's GREAT!!! (You and the poem) Lol!
But anyways, the last stanza was my fav!! Very good poem! I havve to start coming to AP more. But anways, loved the poem!
Love
Lisa 2.0
(lol)
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