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Second Chance

There was a time when you were all mine.
A time I miss above all else.
But, you took that time, and wasted it with lies.
I fell.......hard....for you,
believing in your deception.
Heartbreak,
Pain,
loss, and loneliness invaded me,
flooding my heart and soul.
Now, after a time,
you want back in.
You want to hold me,
kiss me,
fuck me.
Again.
I don't know what to do.
God, I don't know what to do.
Trust.
Should I trust you again?
Should I give me heart to you again?
Will you be true to me,
love me,
honestly tell me how you feel?
God help me!
I don't know what to do.
I am caught in the middle.
Between the guy I love more than anything,
and my fragile heart,
that still cries out for his touch, once more.

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For him. always him.
Written April 11th, 2006

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  • individuality gold member
    April 11, 2006
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    The fragile heart: life and love, forever it will be amused with us and flick us about the growls it sends throughout the air. Spill ink and twist me into the shape of love...


  • Defective Soul
    April 11, 2006
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    A very good write. You expressed the feelings beautifully and got them perfectly. It's a really good poem. If he lied so much, I wouldn't get back with him. But it's up to you. I hope you make the right descision, keep on writing, your work is wonderful.


  • elfholm
    April 11, 2006
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    9/10

    touchdown, babe!!! you got that feeling and frustration just right. Look forward to more. And please stop making me think about my ex!!


  • ayten
    April 11, 2006
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    that is how it always is isn't it? u cry for those who have made u feel the most.