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Heartbreak Full of Pride

Too full of pride to let it show

     too stuborn to give in

when every morning awake is a stab in the chest

    and every night's sleep is a nightmare

nowhere to turn

    nowhere to go back

Too full of pride to let it show

    too stuborn to give in

when every thought electricutes you into weakness

    when every memory brings you to hidden tears

nowhere to turn

    nowhere to go back

when finally you want to scream

   when finally you want to wake from this dream

longing to be free

you're held back by the ropes of pride

   too stubborn to give in

Even though every stab goes straight through the heart

   wounding then wounding again

You continue to hide the pain

   pretending that nothing was wrong

Too full of pride to let it show

   too stubborn to give in

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Written April 10th, 2006

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  • James Dean
    April 11, 2006
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    lovely! thanks so much for entering, I'll love you forever for it! But back to your piece (I know, honestly tadashi! would be your line) (Sorry, I'm a little chattery and excited you entered ... I've read your stuff before ... AND LOVED IT just ... didn't leave a comment ...) anyway ... this was wonderful ... and I loved the format, and how well I can relate!