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a ghost town of trying to hard

Abandoned and quiet,
the wind blows silent,
what will pass by tonight?

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i dont like it much....just thought id give this a shot....
Written April 10th, 2006

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  • Lavender Butterfly
    April 10, 2006
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    This is very profound and definitely thought provoking. Very clever. Thanks so much for this entry... x


  • Master Domtos rose
    April 10, 2006
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    Thought provoking. Who knows what the ghostly residents of a ghost town think at night time? What WILL pass by tonight? Perhaps this was one of the posts Paul Revere rode through ... perhaps the Highwayman pillaged through its streets ... we can never truly know. Great imagery! Good luck in the contest.

    rose