Why can't I get you out of my head and heart?
We know we were meant to be from the start.
We both felt it, and thought we would never part!
Now everyday wake up and give a sigh!
I still can't believe that we said good bye!
Morning, noon, and night I can't help but wonder why?
Was it real? Was it true love?
I thought it was, I thought it was sent from above!
Why did you leave? Why did you take flight like a dove?
After all this time, why can't I see?
That the love of my life will never be!
Will my heart ever stop aching? from you will i ever be free?
Author notes
Written April 10th, 2006
"OMG" dreamdragon6484
A contest entry
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I loved this! So much emotion mixed in with heart aching pain! So good! Good luck in my contest!
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Wow this really touched me I actually felt your pain
I can relate this :]
I feel this way about someone
Everyday I wonder why I can't get over them
amazing write my favorite lines was : "Was it real? Was it true love?
I thought it was, I thought it was sent from above!
Why did you leave? Why did you take flight like a dove?"
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wow! now this is what writing is all about1
yoyr a finalist!
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Was it real...was it true love? I liked those lines especially. Good rhyme scheme and very emotional
Well done and thanks for entering -
Thank you so much for you comment. It really makes me feel good to know that my work is liked.
Sometimes I wish I could get them published. Thanks again for the vote of confadecne. -
i love it
you captured the true feeling of heartache is so many ways i don't know how to say what a wonderful poem i love it keep it comin you should write a book of poetry sand publish it i would buy it in a heart beat -
Great job
THis is a great Poem and you are better than him. He treated you like crap and you are so much better than that. It will get easier some day you will see. -
good
I really like this and It has a really good chance of winning
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