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Slow Burn For Spiritual Knowledge

In pearls of smoke my spirits rise,
within the sparkling flames of fire.
With every plume of ashes fly,
my deepining thoughts grow higher.

Not of daily mundane duties bent,
but of the reasons and rhymes.
For within the luminess spirit flames,
soulful peace has found it's define.

Speak to me oh spirit of the fiery flame,
release my mind from chard earthly treason.
Separate me from my earthbound frame,
prepare my soul to become seasoned.

           ~~~Suseann~~~

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Written April 10th, 2006

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  • Autumn Whisper
    May 21, 2006
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    A fabulous poem suseann, I loved it! Such a beautiful picture for a beautiful poem, well done, its fab!
    best wishes as always
    xElectricEyezx


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 10, 2006
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    A VERY WONDERFUL POEM

    Once again you have captured the moment and your feelings oh so very well. The picture is very appropiate.