The last day of this life
when it finally ends
a transfusion of beauty in flight
knowing it's coming
a great ball from the sky
to halt the production
to hail the destruction
of what was man
one voice, one word passed
Armageddon
Author notes
Written April 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Beauty For the Eyes #18 by Samplette.
300 points, ended April 20, 2006, 9 entries
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Thankyou Sam, yeah I saw the bird taking off as it would as if it were startled then i saw the big moon in the back ground and though yeah that could be heading this way lol, thanks for taking the time to read it and comment as Im sure you have had loads of entries.
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Wow...never would have seen armageddon in the picture without your words. A well created piece. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Wow. This is really very good Tudor. Sometimes I almost can't wait for it to come with the way the world is today, but very nicely written. I always enjoy reading your works.
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the competition was to write about what you saw when you looked into the picture given, I think if you go to the comp page your get it even more, thanks for the comments both of you
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This was a different write from you. Though I don't like to think you'll ever die, or anyone ever will...this does kind of give an end to a story...or something. Nice.
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Great write ben, short and to the point!! good luck in the contest buddy ol pal
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