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Just a country song

I gave you my heart in the summer,
but you didn't want mine,
blind to the eye of this lover,
you faked every smile,
so pretty it was,
it hid your past,
an though i tried so hard,
your pain never gave me a chance...

And I cry for I...
was no more than a stranger..
and I cry for I...
never saw the danger..
and I cry because I..
wanted more...
wanted more...
than to be a stranger..

I felt when I held you,
there could be more than just us,
I felt I could be your shoulder,
and you'd be mine,
you must of laughed the while..,
sweet little child,
for your not let anyone in,
never ...to get close again

And I cry for I...
was no more than a stranger..
and I cry for I...
never saw the danger..
and I cry because I..
wanted more...
wanted more...
than to be a stranger..

The story left broken,
you didn't want a friend..
I'm still the fool that's hoping,
that the friendship will mend,
I threw you so many lines,
you neglected them all,
was I like all the rest
you felt you couldn't trust one

And I cry for I...
was no more than a stranger..
and I cry for I...
never saw the danger..
and I cry because I..
wanted more...
wanted more...
than to be a stranger..

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Written April 10th, 2006

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  • Tudor Rose
    April 11, 2006
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    Your just impossible to please sometimes you know that? lol

  • Forgotten Lyrics
    April 11, 2006
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    You lose either way...now you're a hardass.

  • Tudor Rose
    April 11, 2006
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    Lmao, crying??? I think not hun, I'm glad you liked it though, experience give me inspiration, dont mean Im crying even if I am a little but dissapointed, it's all good

  • Forgotten Lyrics
    April 10, 2006
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    "The story left broken,
    you didn't want a friend..
    I'm still the fool that's hoping,
    that the friendship will mend"

    Maybe the best lines I've ever seen from you. Then again, I haven't even read half your poems/songs. Plus, I could hear the music that'd go along with it. This was simply beautiful. However, I wish you'd stop crying.