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KINGDOMHEARTS II

Thinking of you, where ever you are

We pray for our sorrows to end

And hope that our hearts will blend

Now i will step forward to realize this wish

And who knows

starting a new journey may not be so hard

Or maybe it has already begun

There are many worlds

But they all share the same sky-

One sky one destiny

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Written April 10th, 2006

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  • Dolphin Shaktiheart
    November 2, 2006
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    Wow dude. This hella makes me wanna fire up the ps2, kick it with double D and the Goofster, rip up some heartless and send the nobodies back to nowhere as Sora... ... or Roxas or whoever the *%&( I am.

    In fact I'm giong in the Hall of Empty melodies now, I wil get Riku back, and scarface better not get in my way.

    hsooms
    Edited on Nov 02, 10:40 p.m. because ''.


  • DarkFire-J
    April 12, 2006
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    thank you Sunshinegf love you comment

  • Sunshinegf
    April 12, 2006
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    awesome work on this piece

  • DarkFire-J
    April 11, 2006
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    Love you to

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    April 10, 2006
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    Good Job sweetie! SMOOSH!!!!!!!!!!

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