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Who Am I?

Who am I, oh, I am not sure I know,
But wherever life takes me, I shall go.
And even though, I often wonder why,
The truth is that I don't know who am I.

Maybe I'm a traveler who's out to find,
That which most Men call the undefined.
And without a road, and without an aim,
Born from death's womb, without a name.

Maybe I'm a star, that must give light,
And be one in a billion in the dark night.
To guide the lost wanderer's of the sea,
Once they find their way, forget me.

Maybe I'm the raindrop, falling down,
And forming ripples of life all around.
To live, and give life to many others,
And make enemies out of my brothers.

Maybe I'm a warrior of this big strife,
Struggling away in the battlefield of life.
To fight for myself and then to die,
And once again, I start to wonder "why"?

Am I who I think I am, or am I not,
Once I had known myself, I forgot.
Now I am just walking down this trail,
I don't know myself, I will surely fail.

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CAn I be your brother?
Written April 10th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Iohagh
    June 15, 2006
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    Darling

    Equally beautiful as the gold congradulations.

    Janet


  • maa gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    dear uditji,
    thank you very much for participating in the contest.
    I appreciate your very unique poetic talent to create poems of such beauty and harmony, revealing your soul's longing, your mind's questions, your heart's feelings with grace and ability. the way you guide us through your rich inner world is like walking to a beautiful garden full of colorful and perfumed flowers. it is pure delight for the senses and for the soul.
    thank you for such a gift.

    marion


  • Raazi
    May 3, 2006
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    Sorry, I have a broken finger, so it's a bit difficult But I've added it now- AP brother......or even nephew....anything.

  • Availea
    May 3, 2006
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    Wow, this is AMAZING! As soon as I started reading (and wasn't distracted) I couldn't STOP reading until I was completely done. You have amazing talent my friend, but it seems you forgot to do something. You forgot to put what member of my AP family you want to be!
    Keep up the wonderful work! Great luck in the contest!
    Blessed be & Brightest Blessings,
    Sarah AKA LadyDragonWolfe