death is the most scariest thing.
you have a choice on where you want to spend eternity
you can choose to go to heaven or you can choose to go to hell but that's your decision.
i know that we are all love and that your husband went to heaven caused he loved you and respected you as his wife.
Author notes
Written April 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- From The Heart by bambie k2004.
500 points, ended April 13, 2006, 10 entries
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oh, and i like yr page too, lol.
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Nice write. its rather short, i think u could edit it longer and fully explain emotions and stuf, but I like the idea.
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Very heartfelt write, you can sense your care at sadness. Good job!
Bunny
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nice write.. simple but full of meaning.. 'caused' shoujld be cause i think...
really nice write.. very from the heart..
jess -
very nice write, well done and beautifully penned
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Good idea but not your best poem
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