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A september 11th poem

The flower is filled with sorrow,
Cause so many lives will not see tomorrow,
The flower will not smile,
cause millions of people are living in denial,
The flower is quite mad,
Cause a little orphan baby is sad,
The flower will always remember,
That gloomy day in September,
The flower will never see,
The hopeless feeling inside of me,
The flower will never feel,
That this nightmare is surely real,
The flower is asking why,
Why did all those people have to die?
This flower will never be the same

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Written February 21st, 2003

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  • wizard
    May 6, 2003
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    oooooooo very nice


  • April 25, 2003
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    Very well written. I really paid no attention to Sept 11th because I thought it was rather pathetic but I like the poem nonetheless.