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Friendship Empathany

I had a bad day once again.
I went searching for my one and only friend.
Went to my house, open the door and walked down the hall,
Sat down on the floor and talked to wall.

Hesitant I was at first and a little scared too,
I managed to swallow my fear and say "So, How are you?
But then sparks of silence leaped out towards me,
The wall had no words, How could this be?

I rose to my feet and yelled, " Am I a ghost to you? Can you not Hear me?
Then an impact so strong forced me to fall straight onto one knee.
I placed my face into my hands and just cried,
Turns out  our friendship had died

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Written February 21st, 2003

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  • Blora
    June 21, 2003
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    Wow..that is a really strong poem..I know the feeling far too well.. Good write
    ~Always~
    Laura