It's time for some little play
and to tell you the truth
all I want to do is just get laid.
Open my legs nice and wide,
spread my lips
take a peek inside.
Don't hesitate,
please don't think twice,
through my pouty lips
slip some ice.
Watch me wiggle
watch me squirm,
with your strong hands
hold me down firm.
Take me from behind
you don't have to be kind,
take me up against a wall,
I just want to feel the slap of your balls.
Slam into me,
ram me hard and fast,
ooooh baby,
make it last.
I only came in here for some play,
my wishes and desire,
I just want to get laid!
Author notes
shimmer
A contest entry
- Cumm and Play by sensualbutterfly.
775 points, ended August 22, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Yeah. Um...now I wanna go get laid! Straight to the point. Loved it. Thanks for the entry
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Universal....
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this isnt kinky nor hardcore.
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yumm. very aggressively sexy
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WOW! I love this one! Straight to the point! Niiice!! Great Write!
Good luck in contest!
Missy
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Straight to the point..I like that. This is a great write..I thank you for entering my contest, good luck to you.
*Ktulu Blackwolfe* -
thank you for the applause and this contest was fun. it was easy since when i read your contest here i was already feeling... well i was feeling and i have always been told that my chances were better at getting what i want when i let it be known then keeping it a secret. thank you for the contest and good luck in the judging.
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I love cutting to the chase and get down to business baby! That's one sure way to get what you need and oh the pleasure to treasure! I want to personally thank you for placing an entry in my Turn Me On (For Ladies Only) Contest! I appreciate the hard work and creativity that went into this piece. You have been applauded for taking the challenge I put forth!
Ted E -
lol...i'm still learning what the word subtle means, at times a girl just have to put it up front what she wants. thanks for commenting.
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neato!
subtle??lol but great to read i like the sort of erotica that has no seduction what so ever its pleasurable to read and its my kind of thing...hahaha! -
lol thank you for the comment and i do hope you come out of the faint soon....... i may write something like this again later.
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WOW... faint please miss can i have some more . . .
nice steamy write -
lol... the whole thing sounds like fun. thanks for taking the time to comment.
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this sounds like so much fun, hit it fast and hard.
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lol... i'm glad you liked it. at times a girl has to be up front and to the point
thanks for commenting.
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Hell Yes!! Suttle and right to the point! Very sexy darling. Hope to read more soon, keep up the good work.
Jessie
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