Sex
hard, pounding,
growling
nails in your flesh,
screaming orgasm
sex.
Scream the name,
release the tension
( Pull the cock from the core)
Oooooh yes baby harder!!!
fuck me hard,
make me work,
for the desire thats burning within
maul my tits
hear me pant
((the animalistic feelings unwind))
pump me full of your man seed,
treat me like the slut I am.
Hard, pounding
animalistic sex.
Ooh oh oh oh!!!
fuck me! fuck me!! fuck me!!
Ooohhh right there don't stop!!!
Watch me plunge into
the ecstasy that is an orgasm!!
dip your tounge into my pussy,
and bite on my clit.
Send me spinning.
Sexual frusturation
Author notes
Uh...so I guess I need to get laid!?
Written April 9th, 2006
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the soft coma of your nub of need,
wrapped in the curl of my tongue, suckling it like a pacifier as you become passive, and then arch upward to heavenly delights, thighs locking me there, as I ride your silky thrashing expressions of pure pleasure, only then will I rise when lust is somewhat sated in your eyes, seven inches more then before I tasted you, and impale the emptiness that lies in nerve tingling spasms and stretch its pucker into many long thick strokes of joy implanted.
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Mmmmm, the sensuality of your words...I absolutely love it. But, I'm totally submissive, so it would go something more alone the lines of...
She captured his cock into her wet, hot mouth, sucking with every force of need in her being. Her eyes glazed over with the intensity of a rabid animal. As her long nimble fingers touched on sensitive flesh, she waited and wanted him to burst in her mouth.
I'm just saying
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You're hot...baby..real hot...
You made me hot too...
and now I don't know how to release the tension...
Wish you could be near me...lol
It's an A-class erotica...
No inhibitions...
Using the forbidden words and ideas so openly...
One has to have a lot of courage for that...
You're so 'shameless'...and I love you for that..because I'm that type too...lol
I'd like to read more of your eroticas...
and would love to know about you...
You're terrific...my love...just terrific!
I love you!
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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I am becoming a fan of your erotic section...
great job once again in this genre
ephiphany
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oHH YEAH.
you do needta get laid.
so do i..
its been a week. :|
lol.
this is hott
like.. whoa.
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You could take these lines
and arrange them in any order and you would still have a piece worthy of reading. That's something I have never seen before and I find it very interesting. I can relate to parts of this and it enough to make a Sensual woman cry. I do hope the dry spell has since ended. Well done. -
yes m'dear you do- but hey we've all been there but like dragon song says- with a mind like that im sure the dry spell wont last long at all
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*grins*
Ok babe... You do need it bad *grins*.... but with a mind like yours you should have NO problems
A good solid erotic write, very hot and steamy!!
Dragon
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I've gotten quite a few comments on this entry...I have a few more I should post...
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Damn
You wanna get laid and this made me wanna fuck ... LOL
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lolol thanks.
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seeing how hot you were at time there must have been a hundred guys for to choose from!1 Hope you're like this more often and share the strory of how one got the honor of trying to calm your burning need
the Satyr
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lololol aren't you naughty!! Actually, I ended up doing it myself...and may I say...I'm a fantastic lay!
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Yeah. Needing to get laid? Join the non-fucking club. its been about 3 years for me so....yeah. Nicely written though.
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I think we all need to get laid.
I'm not one for vanilla sex either - you've gotta have energy... and this poem captures that at least
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I'll admit I don't particularly like it - language wise it seems awkward in my mind - but I think it's a good write... if that makes sense?
Cool, catch,
=> Jess -
me and you both need it and I know exactly how you feel LOL!! I loved your piece very erotic and sensual and you did a great job of painting a great picture with this. Great Write!
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You have balls.
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Is that a good thing or a bad thing!?!! ha ha
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A good thing!
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whoa, you really did need laid when you wrote this one. I get this way all the time though....I must be a nympho...cause that is all I want. I have penis envy...hahahahaha
anyways what a great way to help get your frustation out, I think /
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amanda
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damn girl
i know how you feel
i kickied my masters friend out of our room today cuz i needed some
~might get in trouble for that- oh well i'm sure i'll enjoy it
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This is a very intense write and WOW! I just realized that I want to now maul my Mistress...HEHE Anyway I so enjoyed reading this...thank you for the exciting entry..good luck to you in my contest.
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I'm not going to lie. This piece did get me a little...excited...Ok alotta excited because according to everyone who knows me, I'm a horny little bitch that will fuck any man with a penis. Ha ha ha
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Is this the one you wanted me to read? This is steamy. Did you find satisfaction? Tell me how. This is a good and naughty write. Are you still feeling frustrated? This poem alone should have helped.
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Hotttt Stuff right there darling. Glad I read lol. You know me
That was hard-core. I like those kinds lol. Visual images. Nasty use of words (My fav). All in all. Excellent piece. Thanks for sharing. What an animalistic read. 
victoria
a.k.a Pink Ranger
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Hot stuff!!! Well done...love the spirling effect!
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Nice
Very intense tone for a poem. I agree it had some rather strong use of words. Keep writing poetry and check out some of mine! -
whoa, (lol) very strong use of words but, it was still great keep writting!!!
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