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Tips

Tell her how you admire her.                                          Always tell her you love her                                            at all times.When shes upset                                          hold her tight.Pick her over                                           all the other girls you hang                                           out with.Play with her hair.                                          Pick her up  tickle her and                                        wrestle with her.Just talk                                                to her. Tell her jokes.Bring                                           her flowers just because.Hold                                          her hand and run.Just hold her                                  hand.Throw pebbles at her window                                        at night.Let her fall asleep in                                       your arms.Sing to her no matter                                        how awful you sound.Get her mad                                         at you, Then kiss her.give her                                       piggy back rides.Push her on                                        swings.Tell her shes beautiful.                                       When shes sad stay on the phone                                       with her,even if shes not saying                                       any thing.Look into her eyes and                                     smile.Kiss her on her for head.                                        Slow dance with her even if there's                                      no music.And when you fall in love                                    with her.....TELL HER

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Written April 9th, 2006

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  • Teddibly Abnormal
    August 5, 2006
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    oo this one is soo awesome. very very very good tips. (i'm a girl but i'd love him to do all that to me heehee)


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    August 5, 2006
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    I'm here to bring you cheer!!!!!

    Ted E

    PS: This is what I call my Special HUGS Treatment

  • Ebil-Emu
    July 28, 2006
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    You made me cry. DO you know how hard it is to make me cry? This is awsome and I love it. I like the writing style. Good work keep penning peace \\//^-^


  • Inside and out
    April 14, 2006
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    Very unique style that forced me to pay close attention to your words. I quite enjoyed reading this poem. You have given some sage advice in this beautifully written poem. Kudos!