if this playful wind
in my reddish-hue hair
was a longing wish
arising from despair
I hope that it could be
carried far and wide
on the back of this steady horse
as I gallop toward you
on a passion-filled ride
Author notes
wishing to be with someone
Written April 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- If Wishes Were Horses by ea.
300 points, ended April 11, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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power
this is a saga a powerfull write in vision drama action passion romance suspence and love a simple touch
brilliance with the exposed vunerable feeling of a kept promise making me the reader wanting more but byou have given so much in the collective release of such tender words -
power
it is a sasga in vision it is dramatic and full of action suspence and romance pulling at the strings of the heart making sweet melodys beautifully written the feeling exposed brings a whimpering of a promise kept
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ah i like the colour, do you want a brush to tame your hair lol after that gallop it will be all over the show
spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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That Wish Would Be 1st Place Show Horse
Such a steed must at least have hairs of silky gold. -
Thank you superstition!
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This couldn't have come together anymore nicely than it did. It's short, sweet, and extremly impacting.
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I enjoyed the serenity in your words.
Very calming and peaceful.
This is a lovely poem and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Thank you for reading my work and posting comments.
Kind regards,
PB
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very beautiful... This is the way the ladies ride, ladies ride, ladies ride, gallop-a-gallop-a-trot! (Old children's lap game)
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What a sweet poem...whoever you is is so lucky...
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