Did he see you? Your question is left unanswered. As I stare in silence at the darkness around us. You grab my arm and I jump up in fright. Looking at you with fearful eyes I say...
I saw no sockets,
In his hood, dark and black.
But felt his eyes burying deep into my soul,
I still feel them piercing my back.
Just standing there watching me,
I stood rooted, unable to move to leave his glare.
Unable to think, speak or move,
I stood there caught in his evil stare.
Fear him not, you say, go now to your bed. Go sleep and dream only happy and healthy dreams but think not of him. Think not of the demon that puts you in this state.
Alas, he visited me,
In my dreams as I slept.
Still in my slumber tears roll down my cheeks,
And stuck in my dream, I silently wept.
Now you take my hand and pull me along side,
Your cloaked figure which stands so tall.
My frail, virgin body looks nothing,
Weakly I stand, useless and small.
You cup my face in your hands,
You kiss my lips, my eyes grow wide.
We make love, I feel evil awake,
As I slip over to the dark side.
I open my eyes and awake from my sleep,
But only my appearance has stayed the same,
My mind and soul have been taken by dark forces,
You dark, mysterious man you, are to blame.
My soul my virginity, my body, my life,
You took them all and changed it.
You changed me, I no longer am pure,
Your dark sexy lover I become bit by bit.
Ever so slowly I slip.
Author notes
Dont even ask me what this is about just tell me what you think. and if you make any sence of it put that in your comments please
Written April 9th, 2006
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OoOoOh...I woud say that about some one crossing over the line about something...like going to far...That's what I took from it.
Nice though, It's a good read. Nice Job.
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This is awsome. I think this is about you feeling viloated and you can not stand it. Very powerful and full of feeling. Great write.
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this was awsome. It seems so real. r u okay if it is real?
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okay... nice poem.. but srry i don;t get it... like i sort of do but, ummm.. it's not worded right... i'm hopeing to read more from you...
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Dark but truthful!
oh my gosh!! i love it...it is like in a way you wanted to be with him, but in another sense you wanted to keep your purness....same here...do you write songs...cuz this would be a good one!!! -
thanks for the comment!!
Sarah xxx &♥ -
wow so dark i like this
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