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WANA READ THE BEST POEM;CLICK ON THIS LINK
Written April 9th, 2006
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T'hee... Alright "The Blank Poem"
I think its a GREAT idea... because not only is it blank, but it gives you the chance to be like... hmmmmmm... and think about things...It lets you have the chance of putting in words yourself.
The best words are words that are unspoken So yes... I laugh at the people saying "Oh by the way (FYI), this is spamming" Pllllleeeeeeeaaaaaaassseee... Blah Blah Blah... don't give me that crap, your just mad because you didn't have the idea.... Your just mad, because you are getting lots of comments, yada yada on your page. The fact that hes "immature" Please.. Sour Grapes is what I say... all it is is Jelousy! So DarkFire.. or Alex... Great Job, and I hope you comment my poetry... even though they can never be better than this one
Keep up the good work, and I will be checking back on your poetry!
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i fink that this poem is kool....its easy to read...thats the best part
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thanks Bella and it oka being elf lord was kida lame but i had fun while i was one
lol thanks alot for your suport -
Merry meet-
I laugh at Masked Desires. I laugh loud and hard, both at the immature statements, and at the fact she missed the heading to this poem, the one marked 'Humor." Kinda pathetic, really, that such an issue came out of this poem, for I think it's quite brilliant and a clever piece. You have my support and I'm sorry you got de-Elflorded... Kevin's being unreasonable.
Blessed Be-
Bella Lycanthrope -
thanks and that sound very true .....lol
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So smart, this poem!
I think that blackday's comment refers to Masked Desires comment. I am now going to comment. It is my opinion that DarkFire-J is a brilliant poet because by saying nothing, he has said everything. It is an Asian philosophy, actually. "Do nothing and everything will be done." Apply it here and you see what I mean. I have read so many poems and really do comment on 20 or thirty a day, and many of them make NO BLASTED SENSE AT ALL! I have even commented thus, and the poets IM me back and say the poem was not meant to say anything, but just used words in an interesting way. This poem on this page is very refreshing.
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Has anyone ever told you to lighten up?
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Masked Desires, this is my page and what ever i do on it is poetry because it come from me!!! don't get mad if people want to comment me poem because you didn't make this i did and if i'm immature then your are to because this situation is over and you keep bringing it up!!! if you don't like me then stay off my damn page!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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No smart one. I don't think you wrote the poem. But, your comment is considered spam, seeing as how it simply talks about teddy bears and the background and how it was the "best poem [you] read all day"... THAT is considered spam, because it's a lack of actual content for a poem. The "FYI" was towards the "author" of this "best blank poem ever". Which, is rather... egotistical... But, seeing as how a blank page doesn't make a poem, this isn't even a poem... more like someones attempt at wanting to "write" something... Maybe it's brilliance... had it a different title.... But the title just makes the "author" look immature and egotistical.
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um...i am sorry, but anyone could think of and write nothing
take care
xxx
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Masked Desires thinks I wrote the blank poem. She'IM'd me about it. I did not write the brilliant blank poem displayed on this page. I only commented on it. Other people commented on it, too. Will we get in trouble for commenting on a blank poem? I hope not.
waaaaaa! All I did was comment! waaaaaaa! I'm so sorry! waaaaaa! I'll never comment again, I promise! 
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You do realize that that is spamming, right? And can get you into major trouble with the moderators, right?
Oh, and FYI... I think that it seems like the reason you wrote a "blank" poem, is only because you can't write real poetry... Maybe, maybe not... But that's what it looks like... -
The best poem on AP
I love this page so much. It is so peaceful and quiet. You can just sit here and play with these little teddy bears and take a deep breath. Blue is such a lovely color. It is my favorite. I can't tell you how good it makes me feel to be here. This is the best poem I've read all day, including my own, which I messed with a lot. So coming here, is just glorious. It's like sitting at the seashore, all by yourself, with only seagulls flying over. Only here, there's teddy bears, which I like better anyway because they do not fly over and poop on you.
That's another thing. This blue page is so clean. It's not cluttered up at all. You can sit here and think of what you'd like to put in the space, or you can just enjoy the empty space. Personally, I think you should rent out this space, DarkFire-J, because somebody might find it useful and you could make some points off it, or something. Or, maybe you might consider just planting one red rose in the middle of it. Or, maybe inviting a little monkey face 
or a pig
in, or even an alien 
just to keep the teddy bears company.
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hey this is a way to get extra points, my pixies friends are right, all you have to is keep on writing and writing, and then you earn and earn and earn, but I have to say that I just loved the background of the teddy bear ..it stands on this page and is so well done with the colors, and aaww the jacket so cute hehe.... well I think I hit the two point mark or maybe more then that, who knows right???? well keep up the awesome works on AP
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P.S. I just made some pts. by clicking on this blank link. Why don't you check out my work if you have a chance.
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well, you know what it could be named Best Blank Poem or whatever and what do I think. Well, of course you are in the same group that I am so you must be brilliant! Brightest Blessings! LOL!!!!
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John Cage got there first.
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a blank poem only gives us the freedom to imagine what we choose to enter on this page. It allows the reader to open up thereminds to the posssiblity that life isnt always as it seems. You have proved that with this. Dumb is not what we are. We are trusting and for someone to do this just makes me wonder. Thank you for allowing me the creatuvuty to picture for myself what can be on this page.
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very good
I don't care what everyone else thought I thought it was .........
..... ...... ...... ..... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ... ... ...... ...... ...... ...... .... ...... .... ...... ..... ... and .... .... ..... .... .... ..... ..... .... .. .... ....... .... ..... ..... . ...... ..... So you see we may be dumb for looking but you on the other hand were clever weren't you. Please write more of your wonderfull work so that we may read it and comment on it just like this one. Cheryl
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well--i may be dumb but not dumb enough to not leave a long enough comment to not earn the two points that i am going to. as i am working very hard to get to ten thousand for a contest, i think that i have earned them and will now go read something with some sustenance to it. vilanger
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excellent! it's a poem about audience participation - like that 3 mins of silence piece of music!
HELLOOOOOOO
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WHO EVER CLICKED ON THIS LINK IS DUMB BECAUSE YOU CAN'T READ A BLANK POEM
(O.o)
(LOL)
Edited on Apr 24, 6:54 because ''.
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