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Glass

Glass eye vision going blind, ending infinite at the bulk of this shattered glass heart, as the words were left to echo upon this hall of twisted mirrors, the door is broken, the windows are as eyes wide shut, i scream the pitch that shatters and tears and breaks, as the peices of what i've built come crashing down to rip through my skin and rip me apart, i knew what i was leading myself to, i knew it was going to end like this, my demise was foreseen, the blood hits the floor no less harder than you hit my emotions, this glass house comes crashing down, as do i, as does my heart dragging down the world, and i hope you've come to the edge of this all just to see how far i fall, just so could you see how further distant i'm setting myself from you, from this day forth, i end it all, you end it all, together we begin

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Written April 9th, 2006

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  • LifeCurse
    April 9, 2006
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    Pure genious man, I love it how you write it..

    Nice work

  • PureAmethyst
    April 9, 2006
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    I love the write but I think maybe it could be set out better?
    Great job!

    xXxPurexXx

  • Flutterby--x
    April 9, 2006
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    intresting,nice write!

    take care

    Black Mist