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Memory is my Name

My name is Memory,
and, I, myself, am memory.
The oblivion is my enemy
and my shadows within.

As I cross mountains and valleys,
I can see my registers left,
marks reflected in the people’s eyes;
shirking the consuming shadows within.

But when I finally depart,
I can see it was only momentary.
I have now only myself to gaze upon,
and within, I can ever see a dark wheel coming…

And before I fade consumed by my shadows,
falling inside my own well of oblivion,
I will perform what is my task: remember;
remember all that will soon be lost with me.  

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Written April 9th, 2006

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  • ravenofdarkness
    June 9, 2007
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    nice good poem

  • Evasive Angel
    April 15, 2006
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    Excellent Work

    This was a pleasure to read, such a unique tyle and well structured approach. Self anylitic form filled with dark emotion.

    Brilliant writing and a pleasure to read.


  • second-born
    April 11, 2006
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    wow...a very elegant poem...you amaze me with your words selection and definitely how you combined them and create a beautiful poem like this one...goodluck...


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    April 11, 2006
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    It is always a pleasure to read something so very different from the normal writes here. Something philosophical and unusual. This is yet another brilliant subject you hit this time. You never fail to amaze, truly Joao!!!

    Great subject and write!

    Love and light,
    Lencio

  • Joao Camilo
    April 11, 2006
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    Hey, Great to her, Massy. Give her my thanks


  • Vernal Bloom
    April 11, 2006
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    Aali

    Oh, Joao..again another unique poetry written by you.. you write about things that just attract a poet’s attention. I read one of your poetry for Mahboob –she’s my friend- and she likes it as I did.. she proud of you,too! Afarin to you man!
    Thanks for sharing this sweet poem with us

    ~Massy~

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