What can I do to erase the pain
That he brought into your life?
What can I do to help you through
The pain, anguish, and strife?
Help me to understand your situation
Tell me what you want me to do
Show me the way that you are feeling
I値l do everything I can to help you
I know I can never change your past
Or the way he broke your heart
I know that you will always be doubtful
Every time we are apart
But, all I am asking you for is a chance
To prove to you that my love is real
I want you to put your faith in me
And in time my love will help you heal
All that you are feeling
And the pain that tears you apart
Soon it will all be over
Just show me the way to your heart
Open up your eyes and see
Just how much I care
I値l never do anything to hurt you
For you, I will always be there
Will you give me a chance to prove to you
That all I am saying is true?
Darling, hold me close to your heart
And feel all the love I have for you
I can turn your world around
If you would just let go
I can erase all of your heartache
And together we will grow
All I want is for you to be happy
I want you to be free
Of all of the pain and sorrow
That sets you apart from me
It tears my heart apart
Whenever you break down and cry
I often wish that I could read your mind
So that I could finally understand why
You hide behind a mask of memories
Filled with heartache and distress
I wish that for once you would let me in
So that I could fill your heart with tenderness
I値l never know the way you feel
Unless you help me to understand
I promise that I will never break your heart
My love will be even greater than
All that you have ever expected
It値l be more than you値l ever need
Can稚 you see how much I love you?
Darling, please believe in me
Give me the key to unlock your heart
For everything I have said to you is true
I will never hurt you or tear you apart
All I want is to share the rest of my life with you
Please give me a chance and you will see
Together we can rise above
You can count on me until the end
You値l always have the best of my love
Author notes
Written April 8th, 2006
Author Name: Jeremy0826
Option #3
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wow!! This is great to! My favorite part is Give me the key to unlock your heart
For everything I have said to you is true
I will never hurt you or tear you apart
All I want is to share the rest of my life with you
I love how its the key to unlock your heart
Oh my gosh its just so cute!!!
I loved it!!!
Great job!!!
Good luck in my contest!!!
-Erin Lynn -
I'm in tears, this is so sweet. It's a very good poem.
*Fairy* -
you have me sitting here in utter tears. thanks alot!! what i would not give to be able to get to the point where i could believe that someone could love me again. really. i think i can not see the writing i am posting here. wow!!! this is so awesomely written and heartfelt. viyanna r langager
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