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Gluttony

"Gluttony"

Alone
is not the way
i chose to be
it just came
to me
always thought i
could be vacated without
a problem
cut the stem
to set me free
watch it leave

constant overbearing overlooking
suffering a bullet wound to mind
domineering condescending
an arrogant parallel

when a lay my heads on fire
where i stay
I'm beckoned away
i am
alone

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Written April 8th, 2006

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  • future-unfathomable
    June 1, 2006
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    Wheeeeeew, such a deep, emotional write.


  • Kissable and Quiet
    May 26, 2006
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    good

    I enjoyed it.

  • JustEm
    April 9, 2006
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    hey whatz going on?...why the sudden changed in poems and names and attitude?...someone piss you off?...anywayz...nontheless...i like this..shows your talent...hope to hear from ya soon...bye bye
    alwayz,
    Cyndi


  • wanderingstarlet
    April 9, 2006
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    nice. i like it. dark. keep up the good work