"The Declining Struggle"
Why must you do this to me?
Is there something more you want me to see?
Between this fucked up dream,this reality
I don't think theres anything more then there seems
Behind this pathetic vitality
Nice Try,you'll never touch that itch
Nice Try,that fond illusions hard to feel
Nice Try,although it will never be real
The rancid entries of your complications
You've got your problems but
you don't have to feel this pain
and its a shame,everyone should feel the same
Nice Try,you'll never touch that itch
Nice Try,that fond illusions hard to feel
Nice Try,although it will never be real
This internal pain makes the dream seem real
but how can i tell if its all i feel?
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Written April 8th, 2006
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OoooOoooOoooOoooOooOooOOooOOooOo Poems that reveal the truely bottled up emotions that we try so hard to suppress are normally the ones that get seen the most as depression or anger problems....I hope I'm making sense...good write though.
Edited on Jun 01, 4:15 p.m. because ''. -
well, for being so ruthless to some people, then being an okay guy, you can write some kick ass poetry i think. hope you're havin a good one. peace out
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