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Satan's Inside Me

Among, this night of Satan’s way.
The anvil blinds me.
The murderer inside me finds me.
Binds me, against the steel.

My eyes turn a shade of red.
My hands make a fist, full of death.

I’m deceiving what surrounds me.
And I feel no shame.
Call upon me, I am your claim.
Name me what you may.

Author notes

a short piece made in short time. i will come up with somethin' better soon.
Written April 8th, 2006

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  • darkangelcutter
    May 16, 2006
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    HEHEHEHE GOOD ONE, REMEMBER I AM ALWAYS HERE FOR YA


  • Em
    May 13, 2006
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    well not literally but ya know dark menacing feelings etc ... guess that means you got everything across just right

  • Liquid punk
    May 12, 2006
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    Thanx T.. 4 the comment as alwayz.. You're relating to this poem right now.. WoW..Trippy lols. Hope yor good? ~hugz~


  • Em
    May 8, 2006
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    Right now I actually relate to this perfectly ... this was definitely interesting! i like.


  • April 25, 2006
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    Evil

    Interesting

  • Liquid punk
    April 24, 2006
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    o! I hope to plan to build on this (lol) but I doubt it'll happen lol. idk maybe tho!! I do know that I am glad u found this as an interesting piece. N I will for sure check out some of your poetry -Mark-


  • lyrical-rebel
    April 24, 2006
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    oooh!... freaky... i guess v all have a lil evil inside up call it satan or juz call it hidden rage... nice write!... interestin' concept ur dealin' wid.. hope u plan to build on this...


  • Lamia
    April 10, 2006
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    How very sadistic of you...I like it haha. Haven't talked to you in a while, but that's probably b/c I haven't been online. Oh well. But yeah, another excellent poem


  • Sykness
    April 9, 2006
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    hey Markieeee! how r u? long time no talk to u.. well I liked the piece as in a poetric way.. but not as a human way hope he is not really inside u or ill have to kick him out ;P
    love and hugs for you Markie!
    take care.
    -Kate

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