You never knew me long
long enough to like me
long enough for me to love you as my own
being so young, I probably made you confused
why should a stranger care for you
why u might think, because I was with your Mom
NO, because you touched apart of myself
I didn't think you could, not the way you did
you touched my heart
you gave without giving
nothing was for you
it was for your Mom
and for Me, why me
you didn't know me until I came to stay
but your in my prayers son every time I pray.
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Written April 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- Your Views And Emotions by DreameeDarlin2U.
350 points, ended April 9, 2006, 8 entries
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This is a very sweet write. I am glad you feel this way about someone. And kind of sad all at once. He'll know one day how you feel about him, I'm sure. No one can be mad forever. This story is absolutely amazing...and has had an obviously big affect on you, and this, is the best way to put it into a poem. World aside. Beautiful.
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My dear friend, this is such a beautiful write. Very loving and soothing and kind and just what I expect frrom your heart as you are such a wonderful, caring person. I know from my talks with you that this young one has touched you deeply. Things with him might not be what you want them to be right now but give him time and give time time and you will be able to share these things with him.
I love you my friend
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This was such an inspirational piece for me. My husband has a daughter though we haven't seen her in a very long time. But for a couple years when she was 2 I cared for her like she was my own. I miss her very much.........Very heartfelt and emotional write. Great job. Good luck in the contest!
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this is really beautiful and i take it that things didnt end so well in this situation. I guess everything happens for a reason my dear friend. This poem flows really well and shows your emotion strongly. mcuh love
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