Just imagine the perfect friend
Abundance of loyalty to the end.
Spreading love with every motion,
Masters the art of deep devotion.
Insist upon your full attention,
Never fooled by false intention.
Existing only to serve your soul.
Black shiny coat with hazel eyes,
Acts like a puppy no compromise.
Learns every trick, one of a kind,
Loves everyone, she's color blind.
Absent of hate, or any aggression,
Rarely leaves a false impression.
Dear God, Thanks for this blessing!
Author notes
Written April 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- Bone Appetite by WolfHeart.
600 points, ended January 29, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Black Labs...Man's Best Friend by forever-hoping.
900 points, ended March 27, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inside A Dog's Mind by Sprite.
2500 points, ended April 8, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thanks for entering!
I truly love your poem. It is very well written. I have a Lab and know these words to be true. They are a beautiful breed. However, I do not see evidence of what you think the dog is thinking, only of what the dog acts like.
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Congrats on your Silver shiny. Very well written indeed lovely tribute to a black lab through and through.
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Oh...I love it soooo much! Thank you for entering, it really hit home. Aren't Black Labs just the best dogs EVER?!
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Oh, I love this poem. she is beautiful, I love black labs. she looks so peaceful and well rested and yes she is definitely a blessing from God. you did a great job on this poem. good luck in the contest.
kat
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they really are blessings aren't they? lovely poem,thanks for entering and good luck!
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This was pretty good Thanks so much for entering & best of luck to you in my contest
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I love your poem it is very unique! Lovely
Congrats.. I like it, it's beutiful!!!!!
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Thank you for the kind words. Believe it or not, this was the the easiest poem I have ever written. I think that says everything about writing from the heart. Thanks again!
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I think that is an excellent theory sounds like a great pet...I love the rhyming which had to have been really hard to do with an acrostic
good luck and thank you for entering such a great write
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Outstanding #1
Coongratulations on 1st Place! A tremendous terrific write
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Thank you so much for the kind words and your support!
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Really well done for your trophey you deserve it with this piece so well written and so full of love. Brilliant flow and beautiful imagery. Well done and keep up teh good work
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Thank you for the comment on Jasmine Ballard. It easy to write about somthing or someone you love so much. Thanks again!!!
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This was very good ... and very touching.
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Thank you for the kind words. I do love my dog!!! I like pet contests too! I will read up on some other entries on sunday so I can see who else loves their pet. Thanks again and take care.
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Fantastic Penning
Very, Very nice!!!!, and I don't say that very often.
Smooth flow, and a nice show of love for you pet.
Really looking hard at this entry!!!
Good luck in the contest
and thanks again for entering
~tom
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