To laugh beside your friends in harmony
Embracing a new future that awaits
Free to live your life, breathing peacefully
One moment at a time, where love creates
The dreams you never thought you could achieve
As your dear, precious angel, reads to you
Gathering her faith, for you to believe
As you find each pathway divine seems true
I send all my love, with hope in my heart
To your tender soul, who's in need of care
So you know your sorrows, are just the start
Toward a lifetime that's better off here
For you, and all who cherish your sweet soul
Take care of yourself, and try to be strong
Because you're loved, and we want you whole
So you may live life here where you belong
Stay strong, to Justin
Sincerely, Timothy~
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You may read this to your bestfriend Justin,
I sure hope all gets better for him during this difficult time in his life. (Contest Poem for someone's friend)
Written April 8th, 2006
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timothy, a very strong message of hope here! I can tell you have a wonderfully caring heart, and you're a blessing for reaching out this way!
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Wow. A really gooooooood write. This was a nice flow or paste, and you know me I'm one for a good rhyme and flow. And this sure was worth reading. Good luck in the contest. But I know you don't really care if you win or lose, ( I think )
but knowing you as long as I do, I know you write straight from the heart. This shows it right here. And that's all you need to have and do to be a winner in a contest like this, or any other one matter of fact. Thank you for sharing.
victoria
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awesome heartfelt write!!!!
Very nice, and touching write. You certainly have a way with the laguage of the heart!!!
Good luck in the contest, as you always seem to capture what the meaning of the contest is, and great follow through.
Awesome penning
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Such beautiful inspriring words of encouragement. I admire your words......such softness and contentment within them. Very well written.
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A very soothing comforting write. Your loving words came straight from your heart. Best of luck in the contest. Debs x
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Thanks sis~
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you did a most excellent job on this write. the tenderness is what i think i like the most. thank you for writing this for justin. viyanna r langager
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Dear Timothy,
Once again your heart shines true
Sending your love to someone in need
This is one reason why I love you
For your my poeticweaver you see
Thanks for sharing your heart and soul
For your love is so true and pure
You always make me feel whole
Even though your there and not here
Justin needs our love and support
While he faces this hard time in his life
His sorrow we just cant ignore
For his life has to much strife
Thanks for sharing your heart with us..
Much love always,
Tammy
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This is incredibly beautiful and it brought me to tears. Thank you so much for writing this for my friend. I can't tell you how much it means to me. You are such a wonderful poet in so many ways and I thank you for that as well.
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Thanks Sandy, love ya sweetie sis!
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Sweetie, this is just beautiful! Your tender, loving heart always shines forth so wonderfully in your poetry! Very well done, hon; love ya ! Sandy
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