Dew drops glisten upon a scented rose,
The air is crisp on this Spring morn;
Regrets are all gone on yesterday's breeze,
Warm, steamed breath upon my window pane.
Scattered clouds for warm sun to expose,
A bright new day, a smile to adorn;
Inhaling scents of wonders with delicate ease,
Born again hope and drying of rain.
Dancing colors in the grass, flowers’ ring,
From the petals and leaves music comes;
With Rainbow’s reflections and low silver bells
From heaven’s garden, unique picture and tune.
My heart is so merry, want to sing
Song of love, hearts’ beating like a drums;
New season’s rise with various colors, smells
And playful kids, with joy my garden strewn.
Author notes
This poem was written in collaboration with Laura Lamarca,
allpoetry.com/poets/Laura%20Lamarca
in my own, new style Sonanza rhyme:allpoetry.com/Column/1923543
Written April 8th, 2006
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I like Springtime, but I do prefer Autumn. Yes, seasons are very important to all of us. Thank you for your time to read and comment my poetry.
~Sonja~ -
This is a nice spring poem (I get a feeling of spring from it). It also mentions seasons which is important in poems about spring and fall because they seem to be about change and for me seasons keep life interesting! Great job! Good Luck.
Blayde -
Thank you Lady. Actualy I am temporary out of any idea. My muse don't want to talk with me anymore. LOL I was very bussy and my muse has gone to Neverland. Maybe this is a time for contest.
~Sonja~ -
this is so very beautiful. You gave a breathe of fresh air to me and made me smile from ear to ear when I read this piece. you are wonderful in everything you write.. continue on in love my dear. smoosh
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hi sonja....this a sweet write....spring....newness of life....rebirth...breaking forth from within....love floating on the breezes of song.......hugs...Brian... ..
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Your coments are always refreshing too. I am glad you like my poetry about nature. Thank you Abigail.
~Sonja~ -
you excel in nature poems and always bring a real image with it down to the scents you describe i adore this new form and am getting more used to it each time i see it
a very refreshing read once again
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I love nature poetry too. Mostly it is not easy to write and to express about all feelings about it. I am glad you like it
~Sonja~ -
I love nature poetry so much, and the imagery was great! These lines really caught my imagination:
"With Rainbow’s reflections and low silver bells
From heaven’s garden, unique picture and tune."
Thank you for entering my contest
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From time to time, you are not on the first line, but your commens are always welcome.
~Sonja~ -
oh..this time I'm late!
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This is a wonderful and beautifully written piece.Your new form is really great my dear queen.
Love you,
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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i keep seeing this form today and i think that i really like it. you did an extremely good job on this one. thank you for reading my work and leading this to me. viyanna r langager
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Sonanza is allowing you such freedom. Your new structure shows growth each time your write. I can think of no other reward as great as when an established poet breaks away and finds their mark. Your poem here is yet another wonderful extension of the essence within you.
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Thank you Linda for your kindness and your love you shared with all of us.
~Sonja~ -
very nice ..good flow of word useage thank you for sharing..
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Thank you Bob.
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Thank you Mr. Doug I am glad you like it. It is nice to see you again on my site.
~Sonja~ -
Wonderfully written - great use of words - - truly enjoyed your write - Thanks for sharing
Mr. Doug -
Yes, This is truly a wonderful NEW style and glad ou showed me. Great job.
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Thank you Nikki.
~Sonja~ -
beautifully done! this turned out amazing, i loved the imagry, and the style is great! well done
Nikki
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Thank you Kevin. Your words and comments are always a great gift to me
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SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!
Oh Sonja! This is so beautiful! I just let it capture me and take me along with each wonderful word.
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Perfect!
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