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Hooker

There was this rich Chinese doctor
Use to pay me 300 an hour to pull
his nipples like I was yanking teeth
Odd, it bothered me more than him.

Filipino in a dark wig dances her tits
Around, she moves, but they stay put
She has a little dick too, the transvestites
love me, they know I'm a star fucker.

This night is Sangria and old pills
Tight boots and no smokes
I'd rob a bank if it were 1930
But it's not, it don't know what it is.

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Written April 7th, 2006

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  • vaseline
    April 8, 2006
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    I'd rob a bank if it were 1930
    But it's not, it don't know what it is.

    sweet.


  • Naughtygrlred
    April 8, 2006
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    unckle

  • Naughtygrlred
    April 8, 2006
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    This is What it Is

    It is your smile
    It is your walk and what you think you say with that walk
    It is your way of circling wagons around your dreams and lies
    It is your darker side that sits in you half buried like a rock
    It is your fears that move like brown spiders in your eyes
    It is your history with pain and the dried blood on your mouth
    It is your efforts to never be hurt again and still be alive
    It is your unfair, unpredictable/predictable moodiness
    It is your sex that sits in your lap like candy and gold
    It is your voice that tells me to come closer or go away
    It is your fate written on fortune cookie paper and stored in your tomb
    It is your ability to know things could be worse
    It is your holding onto blanket scraps of memories and making them good
    It is your sometimes shallow effect on me
    It is your roots that sit snug in me like a vegetable growing
    It is your name.



  • Xxthe angry gothxX
    April 7, 2006
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    i normally dont comment on pieces of this matter, i think this is an awesome piece. i have read some of your other work and i find it great. i wish you the best of luck in the contest.


  • bobanonymous gold member
    April 7, 2006
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    really good

    I don't really need 4 points but I liked it, completely unsympathetic.
    Edited on Apr 07, 11:58 p.m. because ''.


  • dustookie2
    April 7, 2006
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    well done

    yeah the hooker is there through time from the beginning and will be there at the end.....nice write....enjoyed the poem and the salute to the working guys and girls.....

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