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Rapture!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

O Jesus how I love THEE real good
And how I love to think of THEE
DYING on the Old Rugged Cross
In sunny ole Israel's happy land
On that little old green hill far away
And yet I know that THOU liveth
And that THOU wilt come back to Earth
And that THOU wilt SMASH sinners
To PIECES in a GREAT AND LOVELY RAPTURE
And I shall be with THEE

Laughing at their AGONY

As they suffer in Hell!

             

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Written April 7th, 2006

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  • SilverWolf
    September 18, 2008
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    no wait i take that back
    sorry i read that wrong
    doing a millions things at once

    ok so u say ur christian
    but u condem non christians

    jesus wont "smash" them as you say
    no sir e

    you better step bak and look at what you beleive

    im a christian, i kno your not a true one

  • SilverWolf
    September 18, 2008
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    Amen!


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    August 7, 2008
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    Up until the last three lines I enjoyed this. Pete, you claim to be a "true" Christian yet you sit here condemning people if they don't agree with your perspective and opinion. I'm sure thousands of people on AP have said this but I'll say it again: If you keep condemning people to Hell with your poems, you will eventually end up there yourself. then what will you do with all your bigoted religion? It'll be rendered useless on the day of judgement! Everything you know will not impress the King and (God forbid) He'll declare:"Depart from me Pete, I know you not!" and straight to eternal damnation you go. I'll be watching,and laughing!


    • Mad Pastor Grovell
      August 9, 2008
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      If God dares address me as "Pete" I will certainly tell him off for being so goddam' cheeky. He can call me Pastor Grovell.

      But fear not, only Satanists dare call me "Pete"; whenever I have spoken to Jesus he has always been most polite and respectful to me.


      • RuLives4GodOnly
        August 12, 2008
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        There you go again! How dare you blasphemize the Holy One! "Pastor Grovell" huh? Well, your bigoted religious title suits you perfects for you do indeed "grovell", but only to Satan! You demonized son of Hell, when judgement comes and you're not to be found in Heaven Gates, I sshall look down upon your eternally damned soul and laugh!


        • Mad Pastor Grovell
          August 12, 2008
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          You are very insolent and blasphemous indeed; obviously Satan has ensnared you with his wiles. If I knew who you were I would ask God to forgive you but I know he would say "No way". I feel only sympathy for you because the fires of deepest Hades await you for your blasphemy and sex-sinning.


  • broad-and-fair
    January 16, 2007
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    the ultimate battle of good and evil, good to see a bit of humour here although the message comes across loud and clear. One doesn't have to wait for his return, one can combat evil now, just be sure you are following his teachings and not mans intepretations of them, good luck , Broad


  • Xox ILY xoX
    January 12, 2007
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    Hrm.

    It's very short, some of the details are wrong (on a history level, that is), and I'm not really getting much from it. I get the whole idea about Him coming back for his followers and whatnot, but ... I don't know. I'm just not feeling it very much. Very good try, though.

  • GirlforGod
    April 10, 2006
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    Thanks again for your entry in my contest!!
    Many blessings!! Keep on keepin on!!


  • ----michael----
    April 8, 2006
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    I will not be smitten until I have been smite.

    I loved the power in this, I can imagine it being delivered with furious wrath.

    I think I have a resurrection.


  • Mad Pastor Grovell
    April 8, 2006
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    In fact Israel was founded in 1948. 2006-1948=58 years ago, so you are only 42% wrong. Do NOT try to teach me history. For a Jew you appear to know remarkably little about Israel. Israel was a "region" 1000s of years ago. We are not talking statehood.


  • we are nowhere
    April 8, 2006
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    okay first of all, Jesus did NOT die in israel, I happen to be jewish and know that israel was not yet a country. It's actually a fairly new country, about 100 years old. I don't know if this is some kind of sick joke, but if not you have some serious issues, pal.

    <3Jeni

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