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My Baby Girl

Sparkling brown eyes, and blond curls.
She's my little baby girl.
A toothless smile and tiny fingers.
That sweet smell of Baby Magic lingers.
She suckles my knuckle between her lips,
and holds my hands tight with her little fingertips.
In her daddy's grasp she squirms and wiggles.
If you think she's cute now you oughta hear her giggle.
At first I couldn't imagine a life full of teddy bears and baby powder.
But now i Believe I am nothing without her.
I will hold her tight in my arms,
and promise to protect her from worldly harm.

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i know this isnt my best piece but i know i skipped entering some of your contests before and couldnt bare to miss this one. i hope it is ok and well liked.
Written April 7th, 2006

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  • Ankeeta silver member
    June 21, 2006
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    haha very cute
    Ankita


  • little-hug
    April 8, 2006
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    awwwww wow I love this....... I know my sister Saoirse will love this too.... it is soooo lovely and beautiful. I love how it rhymes and flows and it is so cute. The imagery is perfect and happy
    thank you sooooooooo much for entering
    lots of love
    ellie xoxox


  • Jadestone Doll
    April 7, 2006
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    I like it, I can just smell the baby magic now. Reminds me of when I held my children for the first time.