Gypsy lady spins her yarns,
ancient words of woven darn.
Amunet of fabled claim,
born to nurture life's refrain.
Wolfbane mystic herb of life,
cures the soul's release of strife.
White magic verse of mystic trance,
conjured spell of nature's stance.
Poetic phases of misty moon,
midnight cantinations end too soon.
Poetic powers of mystic muse,
sedate the manic madness tune.
Strum a gypsy's harp and sing,
conjoin all nature life reclaimed .
~~~Suseann~~~
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Written April 7th, 2006
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I still love this Suseann
Thank you so much. I was just venturing over to read it again
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Ha! Your so funny. Sounds like something I'd say.
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love potiion #9
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Fantastic!!!
Well, Suseann, what a beautiful poem, flows so smoothly and sounds almost like a song. Perfect words chosen to express your inspiration on a perfect woman, nature, spirituality. Wow you have really outdone yourself in this poem.
I don't know about this meter stuff, as you know I am a simple free verse writer. To me it sounds really beautiful, a pleasure to read indeed.
As for Gypsy, she is definitely a sweetheart and a very gracious lady. Sweet of you, Suseann to honour her with your wonderful words.
Love and blessings from India - Joel - -
oh this is so sweet gypsy is the absolute best she rocks!!! you did quite well with this write about our dear friend
love and light
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This is so beautifully done! I really loved how you wove "gypsy", "amunet" and "wolfbane" in, that's really creative... and also how you threaded nature and spiritual words in here. She really is such a special person, and you've honoured her well with this.
Christina
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I don't agree with that comment, to be honest, though it rhymes, it has a very nice flow to it and feels more like a free verse on wings of fancy, which I am quite partial too . A Gypsy beat if you will that I find quite captivating. I love it whole heartedly and the whole weavings of nature with mystique is wonderfully done. Thank you, you've made my day I don't know what to say I just adore it and must book mark this immediately. Blessings and thank you so very much again.
Gypsy
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Would you care to illuminate what exactly you'd suggest? I'm all ears.
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A very very choppy read. The lack of consistent meter really kills a poem which has some interesting appeal. Supernatural powers need to just bend and shape this a little bit into a more coherent poem!
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