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My Windmill

I live in a lake of tears
Round and round I go
Sinking and reaching
Finding and holding
You have taken me in
Lift me up
Fly above my pain
Through the aches
Around the holes
Together

I escape from reality
Higher and higher I go
Forgetting and mending
Grasping and holding
You have become my tower
Lift me up
Fly above the pain
Through the aches
Around the holes
Together

I live on a cloud
Over and over I go
Wishing and hoping
Dreaming and longing
You are my one
Lift me up
Fly above the pain
Through the aches
Around the holes
Forever

Author notes

there are few people who have the ability to heal your pains and find your lost smile
Written April 7th, 2006

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  • bas-hful
    April 25, 2006
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    this is really neat.. i like it.. the form is perfect, and it really builds up intensity. well done. thanx for sharing.
    -Sara


  • ObliviousInk
    April 7, 2006
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    neat - i like the end repetition in each stanza. nice short lines - right to the point. rock on.