Problematic
Sympathetic
Careless Distraction
For a violent reaction
Why must they bring me down
Why can't they go a way
Why must they hurt me so
Why Can't they stay a way
Mindless decisions
Of self inflictions
Are uncontrollable
Uncontainable
Why must they bring me down
Why can't they go a way
Why must they hurt me so
Why Can't they stay a way
Author notes
Written April 7th, 2006
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I feel like this poem speaks to me, like I can relate. Awesome write.
~Dokie
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i think this would be a nice short song. i enjoyed it, good job.
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This is very good. I really like it...very awesome.
Fairy*
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wow, this was so good1 way to go Steve, i loved it!
Keep writing!
miss talkin to ya
~Alea -
this sounds kinda like a system of a down song i know..... but it is good. great write, i like the Phsyco one better though...
~mel -
i liek this alot you didi a great job!!! keep upi th good work..i hope allx well with you...
Kelsi -
excelent
wow this is really good but i am kinda worried you ok?
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