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sleepless nights to come

i have sleepless nights to come,
my partners 7 weeks pregnant,
i know its early
but i know sleepless nights will come,
she tosses and turns
like a feline in heat,
her hormones are sky high
like a raging storm it just comes and goes,
i love her a lot
but sometimes she can be a pain in the bum
so i cant wait for the nights
were sleep has vanished and does not exist.

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Written April 7th, 2006

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  • Apache143
    April 9, 2006
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    You are right there it will be sleepless nights but hopefully not till after the baby is born. A good write.


  • April 7, 2006
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    once you are a dad you will never sleep again!!! this was cute. good luck to you both. you left an s off the night in the first line. thats just me being picky, but I really like it when someone tells me that ive done something like that. JM x


  • irene plunkett
    April 7, 2006
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    this is a cool poem considerin u r talkin bout me tossin and turning lol love u lots and im sorry that me being hot is a pain in da bum lol


  • Jacinta Lee
    April 7, 2006
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    great job, i know this must be a hard time for you both

    ~Jacinta