Ever wondered what life would be like?
If your feelings weren't there to strike?
Would they simply find another?
Like your sister, or your brother?
Do you always feel alone?
Wonder why there's no one home?
Cry at night do you try to find?
The last remnants of your broken mind?
Do you wnat to brandish the blade?
Look upon the dragon slade?
Are all the demons dead inside?
Is it your soul or them that's died?
Do you always feel alone?
Felling like there's no one home?
Searching prefusely to seek a life,
Without this never ending strife?
You don't need to feel so all alone,
There's always someone there at home,
You do not see, you have not known,
But listen to me, you're not alone...
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Written April 7th, 2006
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Clap! Clap! Clap! *applause* Wonderful! Amazingly awsome. This is great! Keep up the good work.
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Brilliant great message in this depression is a lonely place it's nice to see people with hope
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Brillant I suffer with depression and that is exactly the way I feel most days you have protrayed it beautifully xx
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This poem is so good! I love it. I love the way you take the reader on a journey, and in the end tell them that really they arnt alone that its only yourself that makes it seem that way. I absolutly love it the title just makes it too! so Awesome.
Well Done on yet another great write.
xxx ooo
Megan -
nice... very positive... but it can b a lil depressin for ppl who come everynite to an empty house/apartment.... but the mssg has been brought across that no matter what someone out in this world truly cares!... nice write! easy style n flow!
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