Circular motion of stars above
Venus they say is the goddess of love
She is my star shining bright
My star of the zodiac feel her light
Keep the universe in balance near and far
Libra, of the morning star
The morning star doth bring the sun
Angel of the morning come
Who is called the morning star?
Libra, twinned with Lucifer
Keep the balance near and far
Libra of the morning star
((Lucifer:- Latin meaning - bringer of light))
Author notes
Written April 7th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- The Weird and The Wonderful! by Psycho Dancer ---.
300 points, ended April 8, 2006, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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interesting
interesting, to me, it seems the Zodiac is contrasted with Lucifer? Kinda gives it an evil comparison. Just my thoughts, enjoyed reading it. -
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i really like your poem...especially how you capture the heart of your sign -
Thanks for commenting Nipper
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Thanks for your comment Shuggie.
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LOL yes, Taurus and Libra both indeed share the same star.
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Thanks for you encouragement - I hope I have a chance.
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Thanks for your comment Terry - much appreciated.
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Nice one , I love it!
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well thought out
What a great piece I would just be lost in this contest as I don't really pay much attention to the stars all I know is I'm a capricorn thanks for a great and educational read.Shug -
cool - i like the rhyme...the words you used fitted the subject perfectly
good luck in the contest and thankyou for entering
take care
xxx
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Excellent
Very well done StarCrossed :-). Best of luck to you in the contest and I will be keeping my fingers crossed for you :-).
Cheers
Terry
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