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Together

My aunt pulls me away
Your dog pulls you away
Together we will come, Someday

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Written April 6th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • NerodicNetta
    April 7, 2006
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    wow! such a short and sweet poem and it gets to the point! nice job i do hope u do wel in the contest cous!

    ~Netta~


  • noble1
    April 7, 2006
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    I liked this very much! Best of luck to you in the contest.


  • Lavender Butterfly
    April 7, 2006
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    This is so sweet and such a clever little piece. Thanks ever so much for this entry... x


  • Vickie J
    April 7, 2006
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    ah...how cute! I loved the message you put the picture to. Good job and best wishes in the contest!~vj