You always remind me
Why I hate people
Openly, angrillously
And callously
Leaving me behind
Because your impatience is
Limitless
And rich
But your personality is not
You always remind me
Why I hate society
Mainly because
you’re a
|.^.J.^.E.^.R.^.K.^.|
And I hope someone pisses on you
Next time you use the urinal
Author notes
Written April 6th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Gothic Poetry (Contest) by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended April 10, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol...aggression well mixed with humour in a ranty kind of way; a specialty of mine
thanks -
This is a great little ranting poem!!!! I don't want to get on your wrong side do I
Well expressed!!
Sarah Louise Hudson
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i love this!
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I wonder how many people get pissed on in urinals. And, as such, am glad that we get stalls with their own doors. lol. The jerk line made me smile. Ah, how I love angst.
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just point me the way and i can do it, i am piss long yards and hit the marks, lol. this is a great poem i think i have a cousin who needs to read this, lol, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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