Ambiance of Love:
Fragrance - satisfies the heart,
Petals of memories,
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A divine flashback,
Immortal photograph...
Author notes
happy moments live forever, still remembered, it'll be treasured...
Written April 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Options Contest, Allowing Prewrites by AlternateCandidate.
500 points, ended August 13, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I think that this is a nice sentiment, but it seems a little overdone. I've seen this topic used over and over, and it gets a bit tedious. Also, the phrase "ambiance of love" just doesn't click with me. I don't exactly know what you meant by that. Feel free to edit. Thank you for entering!
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thank you IceRaven!
Yup, it is. Memories that we still can remember, or flashback, are immortal photograph. 'coz they'll stay forever in our hearts and minds.
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I realy like how the flashback is the immortal potoghraph. Your poem is short but sweet. And full of love.
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thank you for the comment noble1! glad you were drawn to my poem and like it.. thank you again.
ER -
I agree very descriptive as it your poem draws for those reading it. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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thank you stephanie 1969! glad you feel the words!
i wish you all the best great writer..
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Such superb wording and very descriptive. Filled with imagery ~ Thanks so much for this entry... x
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