Spring time promises new life
Vibrant colors; blooming flowers
Fresh air and a fresh start
So why do I still think about the past
It's time to move on, new dreams should evolve
But you still come to mind
Maybe it's the promise you made me when you said good-bye
You said, "Just wait until spring"
Well here it is
And I'm still waiting for you
Am I a fool for waiting around?
Why do I think you are worth it?
I walk alongside the waves splashing against the shore
You're words still linger
The sun is setting
So serene here
But I still think of you
And I'm still in love with you
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Written April 6th, 2006
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very nice you did good on this poem!I would give it a 10 but of 10 if I were a judge for a contest,keep up the good work
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amazing!
OMG this is so sweet.. guys are not worth being upset over. i mean you will find the right one. i mean hey everything happends for a reason and you will be happy when you meet someone so much better then him
and think about it when you meet that person that's so much better then him and you are wiht him.. wouldnt it be harder then if you were single so just keep your head up. and things will work out in the end. AMAZING poem!
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you are an awesome writer, with love
that is so sweet...did he ever come along? if not, its ok...if so, was he worth it? -
I know how you feel. And this poem is so bookmarked.
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awww...awesome job! i thought the setting you created and how you compared it to that feeling was incredible. I enjoyed reading this. Rock on.
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Why have you been so sad and hung up on him love? Fuck him. You're better than that... come on babe. All your problems get washed away in the Orange Sherbert Pool. ( Jumps into the afore mentioned Pool and splashes you with some Sherbert. ) Forget it angel. Try to be happy once again.
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All I have to say is that patience is a virtue! Great write
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beutiful.
this has cheered me up alot.
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Yes, it's time for spring, something new, even if you still think of him - liked this write - sentiments well expressed in the lines, easy to read and understand. Who knows - he might just keep his promise,
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Spring can be such a beautiful time, especially when it's reflected in the eyes of others whom feel passionately about one another.
I can feel your grief and also your devotion for your loved one
in this truly heart rendering write. -
guilty
yes yes it is time for spring its april 8th. -
two thumbs up
i applaud your works. please look at my poems. i just want to get out the word about my poems. so please read them
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