Consistency of win or lose,
so many times I've sang the blues.
Patched it up start over again,
time after time to make amends.
Still it's reeling elation's sent,
me on a joyfulness happy bent.
Falling in love or so it seemed,
more times than not just a fanciful dream.
There was once one who lit the fires,
but it's hard to tell since time transpired.
He was a flash in the pan lover true,
but not with me now so I haven't a clue.
If that sort of thing they call love divine,
could of stood the grilling test of time.
With wide open eyes of youth now slant,
I'll never know of true romance.
At least not the mono on mono type,
but romance of many different things in life.
Proved to be pure joyous illuminations,
causing me to jump for joy celebrations.
Hearth and home family love proclaimed,
brought me happiness in endless frames.
Friends adored and love of pets in nature,
glorious panoramic scenes that I have savored.
This life is a huge cup of soup dejoir,
still I'm left wondering of one true amour.
~~~Suseann~~~
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Written April 6th, 2006
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yes Susie....lovely poem indeed......I can be your onion soup....
.....love the cheeeeeze on top.....but how sweet and sad this is sweetie.....warm and delightful....as always you pen soft and warm thoughts to linger......love your expressed thoughts....
for ya....clappie too...
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Hey!! Thanx a lot for entering my contest~! I really enjoyed reading your poem and you did a fantastic job. Loved it.
Keep up the excellent work!
Blessed Be.
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THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND
With this suseann you have captured my life as it is now, I do enjoy all that is around me in nature but I do miss the love of a lady who will be my only true love in this world, will I ever find her? I do have my doubts.
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I'm not lookin Sherry. It's only a reflection looking back at life. Not really sad. I tend to look behind and not forward enough though.Gotta stop that stuff! Ha!
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nicely done
like the intro..just appeals to me ... nice flow and feel with some good descrirtive pictures portrayed in your words...some really awesome lines just went and read it again..this is one nicely penned poem thank you for sharing good luck in the contest -
Heartfelt piece dear friend its
well written....Hugs and love, Me
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Sad and sweet. Very pleasant to read and many aspects to relate to. Seems to come from the heart. Everything a good poem should be. Thank you for the enjoyable read.
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